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Monday, 7 August 2017

Orana Wildlife Park

Orana Wildlife Park was good overall I enjoyed most of it and I would have liked it if one of the kea's landed on my head or shoulder. I really enjoyed the tigers because they sounded kike a zombie in minecraft and it was super funny. Everything was all right but the giraffes would not eat our leaves =,(.
I liked how there were lots of different types of animals and they all are special in their own way.
I say if you want to go to it.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous30 August 2017 at 09:40

    Hi Joel, My name is Abby and I go to Yaldhurst Model School. It sounds like you had lots of fun at Orana Park and now I want to go there again because I haven’t been there in a while.
    I like how you said what you hoped would happen but also put a sad face on how you felt when the giraffes didn't eat the leaves.
    Next time you could ask the adult who’s with you to take some photos so then you could put photos in of some of the animals so you can get more comments on it.
    What was your favorite animal at Orana Park? Mine is a Tiger because they are really cute.
    Did you want the giraffes to come up and eat the leafs? I would.

    Kind Regards, Abby.
    :)

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  2. Anonymous30 August 2017 at 09:40

    Hi joel My name is Maddison I am a year 5 student at Yaldhurst Model School

    I really liked your blog post it had a lot of good information it was very interesting. I really liked how you said that the tigers sounded like zombies from mindraft. I also liked how you said I liked it overall and you said why


    I also liked how you said how you felt, it was kind of like I was there you had that much cool facts and information, it was a really good blog post. And it kind of funny I really liked it. It was cool how you put the sad face to express how you are feeling


    Maybe next time check your spelling mistakes before you post. Next time it would be cool if you put in one or two photos in to make it more eye catching other than that it was a very good blog post


    What was it like to go there? I hope you had lots and lots of fun
    KA PAI from Maddison ;)

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