more sentences and peel

the -ed start
committed, undaunted, determined, forced, gifted, blighted, thrilled, delighted, blessed, overpowered, drafted, bewildered, surprised, drowned,  foreshadowed, haunted, concerned

E.G. thrilled by the score, coach shouted us all macca's

determined to get out of the cave, Lyyr pushed through the pain in his broken ankle

committed to succeeding, the students completed all their work

the W start
who, while, whilst, when, where, what, whereas

E.G. whereas Liz plays netball, I play hockey

whereas many kids like sports, I prefer to stay inside

whilst Nome was sleeping, Kasane was training




PEEL
topic: video games are better than sports

whilst many people believe that sports are better than video games this statement is clearly false as there are many more types of video games than there are for sports



before you start to ask questions, I will explain there's many types of games adventure games puzzle games look at stuff to get a story games action games first person shooters or FPS' role playing games or RPGs so many types of games yet there are very few types of sports. quickly moving on, video games are better than sports because you can be anyone you want you can be a person in a hulking mech or a simple farmer you can help prevent the genocide of an entire planet's population or you could take care of virtual pets, and you can usually nowadays customise your character to look how you want. Compared to sports where you need to constantly train and make sure you aren't injured to play competitively, all you need in video games is some free time everyday and to develop muscle memory and memorise the buttons.

and those are some reasons why video games are better than sports